GNU bug report logs - #72439
[PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for.

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Package: guix-patches;

Reported by: Florian Pelz <pelzflorian <at> pelzflorian.de>

Date: Sat, 3 Aug 2024 08:17:01 UTC

Severity: normal

Tags: patch

Done: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" <pelzflorian <at> pelzflorian.de>

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From: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" <pelzflorian <at> pelzflorian.de>
To: Ludovic Courtès <ludo <at> gnu.org>
Cc: Maxim Cournoyer <maxim.cournoyer <at> gmail.com>, Matthew Trzcinski <matt <at> excalamus.com>, 72439-done <at> debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: [bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for.
Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 23:05:25 +0200

Hi Ludo, I pushed all three of your reported typos: "the", Oxford comma
and chroots.  Pushed as follow-up commit
91cf240308def2fed3b8649f5e98891171327c78

Ludovic Courtès <ludo <at> gnu.org> writes:
>> +During the installation, the @dfn{build daemon} that must be running
>
> s/the// (I think?)

Yes, because the reader might visit ``Setting Up the Daemon'' much later
than “the” installation, no definite article is better.

Regards,
Florian
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