Subject: Re: [bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for.

From: Ludovic Courtès <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 18:17:00 +0200

Hi Florian,

Florian Pelz <[email-masked]> skribis:

> * doc/guix.texi (Setting Up the Daemon): Specify intended audience.
>
> Change-Id: I784c5f720aa87bddb6455e42181a1e9de5d7ec9a

Good idea.

> +During the installation, the @dfn{build daemon} that must be running

s/the// (I think?)

> +However, some of us have reason to replace outdated daemon versions,
> +tweak it, perform builds on other machines (@pxref{Daemon Offload
> +Setup}) or start it manually in special environments like Chroots

I’d add a comma before “or”, and s/Chroots/``chroots''/

Otherwise LGTM, thanks!

Ludo’.