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[PATCH 0/2] New "Getting Started" section for Guix System

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Message #50 received at 69302 <at> debbugs.gnu.org (full text, mbox):

From: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" <pelzflorian <at> pelzflorian.de>
To: Ludovic Courtès <ludo <at> gnu.org>
Cc: Oleg Pykhalov <go.wigust <at> gmail.com>, 69302 <at> debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 2/2] doc: Add “Inspecting Services” section.
Date: Tue, 27 Feb 2024 12:54:52 +0100

One typo you have not addressed yet:

> +@cindex troubleshooting, for system services
> +@cindex inspecting system services
> +@cindex system services, inspecting
> +As you work on your system configuration, you might wonder why some
> +system service doesn't show up or why the system as not as you expected.

is not as you expected

Otherwise LGTM.

Regards,
Florian

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