Subject: [bug#60153] [PATCH v2 3/3] gnu: python-pygame: Reword description.

From: Liliana Marie Prikler <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2022 21:45:24 +0100

* gnu/packages/game-development.scm (python-pygame)[description]: Join
sentences describing functionality.  Capitalize “Python”.
Cut down the marketing talk.
---
 gnu/packages/game-development.scm | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnu/packages/game-development.scm b/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
index 31bc76d4fd..0f96784dd3 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
@@ -1247,8 +1247,8 @@ (define-public python-pygame
     (home-page "https://www.pygame.org")
     (synopsis "SDL wrapper for Python")
     (description "Pygame is a set of Python modules designed for writing games.
-Pygame adds functionality on top of the excellent SDL library. This allows you
-to create fully featured games and multimedia programs in the python language.")
+It adds functionality on top of the SDL library, allowing you to create games
+and multimedia programs in the Python language.")
     (license (list license:bsd-2
                    ;; python numeric license as listed by Debian looks like
                    ;; an Expat-style license with a warranty disclaimer for
-- 
2.38.1