Subject: Re: [PATCH v3 4/7] gnu: font-chiron-sung-hk: Use English for synopsis.

From: Liliana Marie Prikler <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 08 Aug 2022 07:46:29 +0200

Am Montag, dem 08.08.2022 um 09:48 +0800 schrieb Hilton Chain:
> From 9007077505468b65658f8be73519d175e57a4637 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00
> 2001
> From: Hilton Chain <[email-masked]>
> Date: Mon, 8 Aug 2022 09:38:37 +0800
> Subject: [PATCH v3 4/7] gnu: font-chiron-sung-hk: Use English for
> synopsis.
> 
> * gnu/packages/fonts.scm (font-chiron-sung-hk)
> [synopsis,description]: Use English.
> ---
>  gnu/packages/fonts.scm | 8 +++++---
>  1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/gnu/packages/fonts.scm b/gnu/packages/fonts.scm
> index 2acb5b9e44..670bb58933 100644
> --- a/gnu/packages/fonts.scm
> +++ b/gnu/packages/fonts.scm
> @@ -2767,10 +2767,12 @@ (define-public font-chiron-sung-hk
>                 
> "0iqlnb7825kisg2avhr9hwwvb4jw8f642vvmms5dw6m9czzydpgw"))))
>      (build-system font-build-system)
>      (home-page "https://chiron-fonts.github.io/")
> -    (synopsis "昭源宋體")
> +    (synopsis "Traditional Chinese Song typeface")
>      (description
> -     "Chiron Sung HK (昭源宋體) is a Traditional Chinese serif
> - typeface based on Adobe’s Source Han Serif (a.k.a. Google’s Noto
> Sans CJK).")
> +     "Chiron Sung HK is a Traditional Chinese Song typeface based on
> the Hong
> +Kong variant of Adobe’s Source Han Serif.  The font aims at
> providing a modern,
> +region-agnostic glyph set adopting the “modern” glyph style that is
> similar to
> +the prevailing, usually commercial, typefaces in Traditional Chinese
> regions.")
>      (license license:silofl1.1)))
I would still s/the prevailing, usually commercial,/prevalent/, but
other than that LGTM.