Subject: [bug#52113] [PATCH] gnu: Add pnmixer

From: Nicolas Goaziou <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2021 21:43:20 +0100

Hello,

Jaft <[email-masked]> writes:

> * gnu/packages/gtk.scm (pnmixer):Add PNMixer

Thank you. Some comments follow.

> +(define-public pnmixer
> +  (let ([version "0.7.2"])

Nitpick: we don't use square brackets for let. Besides, you do not need
a binding here, you just need to hard-code it in the version field.

> +    (package
> +      (name "pnmixer")
> +      (version version)
> +      (source (origin

Could you move origin below source?

> +                (method git-fetch)
> +                (uri (git-reference
> +                      (url "https://github.com/nicklan/pnmixer/")
> +                      (commit (string-append "v" version))))
> +                (file-name (git-file-name name version))
> +                (sha256 (base32
> +                         "0416pa933ddf4b7ph9zxhk5jppkk7ppcq1aqph6xsrfnka4yb148"))

Could you move base32 below sha256 and put the hash string in front of base32?

> +                (modules '((guix build utils)))))

The modules part is not required. You can remove it.

> +    (build-system cmake-build-system)
> +    (arguments `(#:phases (modify-phases %standard-phases (delete 'check))))

The correct way to do this is to add a "#:tests? #f" argument, with
a comment explaining why you are disabling tests.

> +    (native-inputs `(("pkg-config" ,pkg-config)
> +                     ("gettext" ,gettext-minimal)))

Native inputs should be ordered alphabetically. Besides, the list should
be moved on the line below native-inputs.

> +    (inputs `(("alsa-lib" ,alsa-lib)
> +              ("glib" ,glib)
> +              ("libx11" ,libx11)
> +              ("gtk+" ,gtk+)
> +              ("libnotify" ,libnotify)))

Ditto: please order inputs alphabetically and move them below the inputs
field name.

> +    (home-page "https://github.com/nicklan/pnmixer/")
> +    (synopsis "Simple mixer application designed to run in your system tray")

Nitpick: you can remove "your" in the synopsis

Could you send an updated patch?

Regards,
-- 
Nicolas Goaziou