Subject: Re: [bug#50054] [PATCH v2 1/3] gnu: Add bx

From: Ludovic Courtès <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 13 May 2024 14:37:31 +0200

Hi,

Andy Tai <[email-masked]> skribis:

> * gnu/packages/graphics.scm (bx): New variable
>
> Change-Id: I7a0b4ccfb2e7a1edad80da0ba55fa5cd0fca0032

Nitpicking:

> +      (home-page "https://github.com/bkaradzic/bx")
> +      (synopsis "Base library used across multiple projects ")

Could you change it to make it clear what it’s about?  Maybe something
like “C++ utility library for the Bgfx graphics library”?

(Is it C++, actually?)

Please also remove the trailing space.

> +      (description
> +       "Bx is an base library that implements low level functions of the

s/an base/a base/

But again, try being more explicit.

TIA,
Ludo’.