Subject: bug#38424: [PATCH] Add new filter functions to Package Menu

From: Stefan Kangas <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 01 Dec 2019 12:16:43 +0100

Stefan Kangas <[email-masked]> writes:

>>> * doc/emacs/package.texi (Package Menu): Document it.
>>
>> This tells nothing about the changes which aren't "documenting it".
>> (And, btw, what is "it" here is not clear at all.)
>
> Thanks.  I thought that was how we usually wrote.
>
> Is "Document the new commands." better?

Wait, do you mean to also comment on moving the old commands around?
If so, I'd suggest the following: "Document the new commands and move
the fitering commands to follow a better sorting order."

Does that sound better?

Best regards,
Stefan Kangas