Subject: Re: [bug#37988] [PATCH 4/6] gnu: Add r-cytolib.

From: Ricardo Wurmus <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2019 12:41:29 +0100

zimoun <[email-masked]> writes:

> * gnu/packages/bioconductor.scm (r-cytolib): New variable.
[…]
> +    (synopsis "C++ infrastructure for representing and interacting
> with the gated cytometry")

I would remove “the” from “the gated cytometry”.  How about
“Infrastructure for working with gated cytometry data”?

> +    (description "This package provides the core data structure and API to
> +represent and interact with the gated cytometry data.")

Here I’d also remove “the”.

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Ricardo