Subject: Re: [bug#29561] [PATCH 2/4] gnu: Add bctoolbox.

From: [email-masked] (Ludovic Courtès)
Date: Fri, 08 Dec 2017 10:31:35 +0100

Ricardo Wurmus <[email-masked]> skribis:

> * gnu/packages/telephony.scm (bctoolbox): New variable.

[...]

> +    (synopsis "Utilities library for linphone software")

“Linphone” should be capitalized.

Also, I suspect it should be just “Linphone” or “the Linphone program”,
no?

> +    (description "BCtoolbox is a utilities library used by Belledonne
> +Communications softwares like linphone.")
                          ^
Singular.

It would be nice to expound a bit, if possible.

Otherwise LGTM.

Thanks!

Ludo’.