Subject: Re: [bug#28900] [PATCH] doc: Clarify description of etc-service-type.

From: [email-masked] (Ludovic Courtès)
Date: Thu, 19 Oct 2017 23:14:52 +0200

Hi,

Hartmut Goebel <[email-masked]> skribis:

> * doc/guix.texi (Service Reference): Update 'etc-service-type'
>   documentation.
> ---
>  doc/guix.texi | 3 ++-
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
> index b7f4f88f9..2fc98f0fe 100644
> --- a/doc/guix.texi
> +++ b/doc/guix.texi
> @@ -18605,7 +18605,8 @@ The boot script is what the initial RAM disk runs when booting.
>  @end defvr
>  
>  @defvr {Scheme Variable} etc-service-type
> -The type of the @file{/etc} service.  This service can be extended by
> +The type of the @file{/etc} service. This service is used to create
                                       ^
Please preserve space here (the convention is to have two spaces after
an end-of-sentence period.)

> +files under @file{/etc} and can be extended by
>  passing it name/file tuples such as:

LGTM, thanks!

Ludo’.