Subject: bug#27007: [PATCH 2/2] doc: Adapt to multiple bootloader support.

From: [email-masked] (Ludovic Courtès)
Date: Mon, 05 Jun 2017 12:38:13 +0200

Danny Milosavljevic <[email-masked]> skribis:

>> +Note that all fields of @code{bootloader-configuration} are not
>> +necessarily handled by all GuixSD supported bootloaders.
>
> Sounds weird to me.
>
> How about "Note that not all fields of ... are necessarily handled by every GuixSD-supported bootloader" ?

Or: “Some of the bootloaders do not honor every field of
@code{bootloader-configuration}.  For instance, the extlinux bootloader
does not support themes and thus ignores the @code{theme} field.”  ?

Ludo’.