Subject: Re: bug#11862: [PATCH 1/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Offset modifier with a comma

From: Richard Stallman <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2012 06:13:55 -0400

-  Sometimes to help describe one form we show another form that
    +  Sometimes to help describe one form, we show another form that
     produces identical results.

An unpaired comma here is not correct.
This would be correct

    +  Sometimes, to help describe one form, we show another form that

or this

    +  To help describe one form, we sometimes show another form that

However, the current text is also correct; commas here are not
required.

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