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[PATCH 00/14] Copyediting: etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL

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Message #41 received at submit <at> debbugs.gnu.org (full text, mbox):

From: Michael Witten <mfwitten <at> gmail.com>
To: bug-gnu-emacs <at> gnu.org
Subject: [PATCH 12/14] etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Make consistent the white space
	around `>>' instructions
Date: Wed, 13 Jun 2012 00:18:22 -0000

Date: Tue, 12 Jun 2012 03:47:39 +0000
---
 etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL | 21 +++++++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL b/etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL
index ca451b6..8f4d8fd 100644
--- a/etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL
+++ b/etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ The characters ">>" at the left margin indicate directions for you to
 try using a command.  For instance:
 <<Blank lines inserted around following line by help-with-tutorial>>
 [Middle of page left blank for didactic purposes.   Text continues below]
->>  Now type C-v (View next screen) to move to the next screen.
-	(go ahead, do it by holding down the CONTROL key while typing v).
-	From now on, you should do this again whenever you finish
-	reading the screen.
+>> Now type C-v (View next screen) to move to the next screen.
+   (go ahead, do it by holding down the CONTROL key while typing v).
+   From now on, you should do this again whenever you finish
+   reading the screen.
 
 Note that there is an overlap of two lines when you move from screen
 to screen; this provides some continuity so you can continue reading
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ to place in the text.  You already know how to move forward one screen,
 with C-v.  To move backwards one screen, type M-v (hold down the META key
 and type v, or type <ESC>v if you do not have a META, EDIT, or ALT key).
 
->>  Try typing M-v and then C-v, a few times.
+>> Try typing M-v and then C-v, a few times.
 
 
 * SUMMARY
@@ -284,6 +284,7 @@ which contains the cursor, to occupy the full screen.  It deletes all
 other windows.
 
 >> Move the cursor to this line and type C-u 0 C-l.
+
 >> Type C-h k C-f.
    See how this window shrinks, while a new one appears
    to display documentation on the C-f command.
@@ -344,7 +345,7 @@ Remember that most Emacs commands can be given a repeat count;
 this includes text characters.  Repeating a text character inserts
 it several times.
 
->>  Try that now; type C-u 8 * to insert ********.
+>> Try that now; type C-u 8 * to insert ********.
 
 You've now learned the most basic way of typing something in
 Emacs and correcting errors.  You can delete by words or lines
@@ -372,10 +373,13 @@ position where you typed C-<SPC>.  Finally, type C-w.  This kills all
 the text between the two positions.
 
 >> Move the cursor to the Y at the start of the previous paragraph.
+
 >> Type C-<SPC>.  Emacs should display a message "Mark set"
    at the bottom of the screen.
+
 >> Move the cursor to the n in "end", on the second line of the
    paragraph.
+
 >> Type C-w.  This will kill the text starting from the Y,
    and ending just before the n.
 
@@ -391,6 +395,7 @@ case, with no argument.  When given an argument, they kill instead.
 
 >> Move the cursor to the beginning of a line which is not empty.
    Then type C-k to kill the text on that line.
+
 >> Type C-k a second time.  You'll see that it kills the Newline
    which follows that line.
 
@@ -836,8 +841,11 @@ you want to search for.  <Return> terminates a search.
    type the word 'cursor', pausing after you type each
    character to notice what happens to the cursor.
    Now you have searched for "cursor", once.
+
 >> Type C-s again, to search for the next occurrence of "cursor".
+
 >> Now type <DEL> four times and see how the cursor moves.
+
 >> Type <Return> to terminate the search.
 
 Did you see what happened?  Emacs, in an incremental search, tries to
@@ -887,6 +895,7 @@ Emacs terms.)
    (If you do not have a real META key, type <ESC> C-v.)
 
 >> Type C-x o ("o" for "other") to move the cursor to the bottom window.
+
 >> Use C-v and M-v in the bottom window to scroll it.
    Keep reading these directions in the top window.
 
-- 
1.7.10.2.484.gcd07cc5

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