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[PATCH 00/14] Copyediting: etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL
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Reported by: Michael Witten <mfwitten <at> gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 13 Jun 2012 00:34:01 UTC
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
Done: Chong Yidong <cyd <at> gnu.org>
Bug is archived. No further changes may be made.
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Whilst reading through the TUTORIAL, I made a few minor modifications.
The following is a summary of the resulting patch series, the last
patch of which adds an entry to etc/ChangeLog:
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Remove text saying `C-x 1' is first 2-char command
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Describe the act of scrolling text more consistently
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Remove redundant comparison of killing and deleting
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Eradicate the future tense
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Minor rewording to streamline and generalize `C-x s'
intro
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Use `application' consistently by replacing an
occurence of `program'
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Generalize the description of when to use `C-x C-c'
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Remove the word `globally'
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Replace occurences of `--' with more appropriate
text
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: c-h-a-n-g-e-d -> "changed"
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Complete instructions by telling the user to move
the cursor
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Make consistent the white space around `>>'
instructions
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL: Place `C-x C-f' beside `find-file' for clarity
etc/ChangeLog: Note my patch series for etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL
etc/ChangeLog | 10 +++++
etc/tutorials/TUTORIAL | 118 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------
2 files changed, 78 insertions(+), 50 deletions(-)
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1.7.10.2.484.gcd07cc5
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