Hi,

I sent v9 (Message-ID: 8734hiskwm.fsf@gmail.com) but that has not
reached the list, hum?!  And Hartmut sent a diff as v9, hence v10.  :-)

Changes compared to v8:

 • Changed some level for the subtitles.  And added “Getting Started”.
 
 • Removed trailing dot after repository URL.

 • Reworded ’prospective’.

 • Removed redundant information about “submitted” and pointed to the
   dedicated section.  Clarified using the term “draft”.

 • Replaced the term RFC by GCD.

 • Added a sentence about the role of “Sponsor”.  And added a
   “Contributor” role.  The idea is to rely on that term for clarifying
   “author” and who can discuss.  But then, the term does not appear…

 • Add section “Channel of Communication”.

 • Revamped the artist view of the timeline.

 • Minor tweaks under “Submission Period”.

 • Minor tweaks under “Discussion Period”.  Added a paragraph to deal
   with the case where “Author” and “Sponsor” vanish.

 • Minor tweaks under “Deliberation Period”: moved sentence; removed
   redundant information.

 • Minor tweaks under “Merging GCD”.


WDYT?

Cheers,
simon

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