Hi,

Please find attach the v9;  I hope it addresses the comments.

Attached the diff and the document.  The minor changes are:

 • Point alone “1. Clone …”

 • Replace remaining RFC with GCD.

 • Add a sentence about “Sponsor” role.

 • Add the role of “Contributor”.

 • Tweak the artist view of the Timeline

 • Explicit mention that everyone can participate to the “Discussion
   Period”.  And mention that the main concerns and/or opposition are
   collected to the final document.

 • Move upfront the aim of “Deliberation Period”.  Remove a redundant
   sentence.

 • Explicit mention the state ‘deprecated’.


WDYT?

Cheers,
simon

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